Tell me, can I?

Piece for the GGAR contest here: [link]

Series: Go Get A Roomie
Characters: Lillian and Roomie
Media: Original (graphite pencil), colored in PS CS4
Background Texture: Free texture library here: [link]

Poem on the wall written by me:
"I want to hold you close
I want to feel your breath on my skin
Breathe you in, feel the ecstasy
I can't get enough of you
Drawn to you from the very start
I can't live without you.

Tell me, can I stay beside you?
Can I watch over you as you sleep?
Tell me, can I stay beside you?
Can I share your dreams with you?
Tell me, can I stay beside you?
Can I melt into you?

We come from different worlds,
But in our dreams we collide.
My carnal hunger, threatens reason.
Struggle to control this primal instinct.
I want you.

Tell me, can I stay beside you?
Can I watch over you as you sleep?
Tell me, can I stay beside you?
Can I share your dreams with you?
Tell me, can I stay beside you?
Can I melt into you?

Just for one night, let me stay.
Just for one night, let me dream,
That in this world there is only
You and me.
Tell me, can I stay beside you?"